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Old 05-19-04, 08:37 AM   #11
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Yo its rare that we see battles like this its was a pretty good battle for both mcees....

Mad Dog's best line: "After u get shot, shocked, hit wit a cake & drown aint really much u can do/
Dont put urself on audio...no 1 would attend to ur debut/"

Worst Line: "But i bet u already been through it all/
Best chance of you havin a full crowd...is ur fam @ ur funeral"

N-Sight's best line: "WTF!?!..I didn't mean for you to drop this weak shit when I said 'be easy'..-
Is that your verse..or did ur cat run across the keyboard while u were sleeping"

Worst Line:"You're a FUCKIN' joke man..who da hell u think u are exposin' ur chest..-
I'm explodin' ur text..anotha noobie in da bag like it's groceries I rep."

Both good posts.....Mad Dog work on you structure and try to make it flow better every thing els is all good........N-Sight try to not make your sentences to long its kinda hard to fallow.......so now it comes down to the moment of truth my vote is for.......................N-Sight.
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Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
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