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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Uh...me vs N Sight pt 1 yeah im feelin the urge to merk...time to put in work...HERE WE GO!!!

(Verse)
Aight N Sight 1 on 1 lets keep this battle clean/
Coz these lyrics'll leave u a bloody mess...better use that Mr Sheen/
U got 12 wins from battling nobodies and still i wonder how u manage?/
So u got me 'N Sight'...but its time i make u Vanish/
Now listen to me as i speak coz i can see u feelin weak/
Better call ur beetch and tell her ur futures lookin bleak/
Put her in ur will...coz ur startin to get ill/
Watch me wit the blade and prepare to have ur blood spilled/
Ur like OJ in Naked Gun...u accident prone its true/
After u get shot, shocked, hit wit a cake & drown aint really much u can do/
Dont put urself on audio...no 1 would attend to ur debut/
But i bet u already been through it all/
Best chance of you havin a full crowd...is ur fam @ ur funeral/
Now as u creep and crawl dont forget to mention my name/
Dont fear me dawg jus coz i drove u insane in ur membrane/
Coz im really a nice fella...ask ur bitch as i was givin her pussy pain/ Ha ha

Aight im done lets get it crackin!!! VOTES!!!

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mhuhahahaaa

**walks in...sees comp. dies laughin....ahem...hehehe*


Aiyo,

I'm checkin' your Google History..see where you been before you started dissin me..-
~free-gay-sex~..~meet-gay-cats~..~beef cake stats-..kid, UR HISTORY!..-
Faggot, u got a 'clock around ur dick'..and when I walk in, ur 'time is up'..-
I'll 'break you' like the 'Midas touch'..u'd be in jail if it was a crime to suck..-
WTF!?!..I didn't mean for you to drop this weak shit when I said 'be easy'..-
Is that your verse..or did ur cat run across the keyboard while u were sleeping..-{Meow}
Cuz ur wack as fuck..you're all noise but no danger like Thunder claps..-
I 'ensure ur verse' wuz reviewed when you 'sent it'..now u can 'kiss my bumper' jack..-
Dismissed like skool before the summer..ur a damn fool for challengin vets..-
I'll make ur 'heart stop' next..you got life lines? nah, don't count on ur text..-
Bitch ur not merkin' me ur urkin' me..ur punches ain't workin', see..-
Affter dis battle..u'll be missin' like ur wordplay goin', 'where is he'..-
Don't be 'mad dawg' cuz ur ain't winnin' this battle wit tired lines..-
I hit ur wit a 'left so hard..ur shitty record goin' to FIVE-FIVE..- {it's 5-4 now}
You're a FUCKIN' joke man..who da hell u think u are exposin' ur chest..-
I'm explodin' ur text..anotha noobie in da bag like it's groceries I rep..-

FUCK OUTTA HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUR!

Aight peeps verses are in and lets get the votes comin in UPPIN!!!

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lol
Multies:Nsight
Wordplay:Nsight
Punches:Nsight
Flow:ties
Entertaining:Nsight

Nsight easily i can't take the other dogg seriously cuz of the dog on his sig and his punches were weak and his flow fell off in certain places so Nsight gt my vote

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Damn. I read Mad Dog's verse and I thought he'd probably have it considering the quality of battlers on this site, but then N Sight came with some NICE punches. one of the best verses ive seen while ive been on here. good wordplay and punches. That's the shitt hat wins battles.

Multies:Nsight
i agree with Spoken bluntly


Wordplay:Nsight
Punches:Nsight
Flow:ties
Entertaining:Nsight

your wordplay was amazin' Nsight won this battle with ease

I'm goin' with N-Sight on this one. His punches were better as well as his multi's, personals, and structure. Just a all around win. Good verse. MadDog you had a few punches' but N-Sight's was hittin' more and you really didn't use any mulit's. Good Battle

My Vote N-Sight

Return tha fav!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125216
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125019

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LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

return the fava
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...44&page=2&pp=15

Yo its rare that we see battles like this its was a pretty good battle for both mcees....

Mad Dog's best line: "After u get shot, shocked, hit wit a cake & drown aint really much u can do/
Dont put urself on audio...no 1 would attend to ur debut/"

Worst Line: "But i bet u already been through it all/
Best chance of you havin a full crowd...is ur fam @ ur funeral"

N-Sight's best line: "WTF!?!..I didn't mean for you to drop this weak shit when I said 'be easy'..-
Is that your verse..or did ur cat run across the keyboard while u were sleeping"

Worst Line:"You're a FUCKIN' joke man..who da hell u think u are exposin' ur chest..-
I'm explodin' ur text..anotha noobie in da bag like it's groceries I rep."

Both good posts.....Mad Dog work on you structure and try to make it flow better every thing els is all good........N-Sight try to not make your sentences to long its kinda hard to fallow.......so now it comes down to the moment of truth my vote is for.......................N-Sight.

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