v/ Blacksmith.

Vocab was ill.. punches were consistant.. lines looked a lil stretched at times an some rhymes were a lil forced.. but you stayed on point generally.. nice fresh concepts.. personals were cool when used.. fine mind.. nasty verse.. loadsa played punches.. you used the word `penis`.. flow was non-existant.. where were the personals? everything was wrong with ya verse.. mad stretched an too much ` i`m literally gonna come an kill you` b/s which sounds childish.

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