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rappin at this chump is easy, wrapp you in tin foil cover your stinkin ass up quickly/
before you get cut up, like shereddin your thin layers cuttin bone spilnters/
lyrics that are ment to make you quivver, like A frost bite to make u shivver/
drop your penis off frozen hopin it will land in a pond for peranas to stick there teeth in to/
i'll tel ur doctors your clinically unstable, and to knock you over the head with a steel table/
this guys dislexic , who got a thing about sayin shit backwards, instead of fawards/
like a romote control rewound backwards, im der laughing wid humour/
im der smashin your head with a slege hammer despratly, cause this bitch gets me down cuz he's so dim/
rip both of your eyes, makin you look like a cyclops, with both eyes departed, drawn to the middle/
next time you battle, don't sit to close to the computer, I might grab u and stab you wid a six inch blade cutting you/

check ill be with u soon dj boy..i mean spin the decks

Fine Minds disillusioned or confusing me with an amateur..You can tell he’s an Actor
Only flows hes dropping is through sweat when my texts (techs) bring the Drama..
Timbs break your knuckles..fuck this tussle cos youll never be able to punch harder…
Maybe u asked for battle cos im a skill provider… your boys said u were ill? Well your boys are fuckin liars..
this losers playing with fire so rap battles can make a toast of my victory..
dead corpsed buried feet under now ur history... dont get scared i just mean lyrically;.
my verbs take effect off sick graphics wreckin your optics...
throw heat like tropics..fine minds facing cuts horrific from this vet...
im eroding mic rodents with fine components, exsposin this cats broken neck...
battling me was your only honour and token, cos uve been put in check...
words disturbed your mind set like i a wild hex...this childs laid to rest...

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v/ Blacksmith.

Vocab was ill.. punches were consistant.. lines looked a lil stretched at times an some rhymes were a lil forced.. but you stayed on point generally.. nice fresh concepts.. personals were cool when used.. fine mind.. nasty verse.. loadsa played punches.. you used the word `penis`.. flow was non-existant.. where were the personals? everything was wrong with ya verse.. mad stretched an too much ` i`m literally gonna come an kill you` b/s which sounds childish.

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fine mind that was koo i like u flow
otha guy man that was not good this is a ko


vote-fine mind

uppin this battle one last time......................

^^^^no seriously this time...lets get some vote ...

Aight BlackSmith nice verse you stayed on point but try to shorten you lines up a bit it will help the reader.....and Fine Mind that was an aaight verse it reminds me of an early me in an weard erie sort of way....your doin what i call Lryicle Murder but next time get your rhymein words togeather and try to invent new ways to kill a person like for instance:wit a hot wheels car or sumthin na mean? but untill you get your rhymes together i cant vote for you....and dont give up just cause you lose keep tryin man youll get better.

V/BlackSmith

aaight i droped an honest one for you now its your turn..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124769

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

blacksmith u murdered it son!!! keep it up and u'll go along way. peace

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aight verses on both sides but I think that Blacksmith just got @ fine mind harder.

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"m der smashin your head with a slege hammer despratly, cause this bitch gets me down cuz he's so dim/"-fine mind
where is the rhyme?Maybe it's just me, n it's possible i missed it, so could u show me? Then when U rhymed words endin n -le with words like you n to it just seemed like u had to stretch 2 rhyme wit such easy words.No offense just a little advise, work on ur vocab n punches.

vote goes to blacksmith b/c...

he had better wordplay n metas. his punches just hit straight up harder. fine mind had a nice verse as well but wasn't as touch as blacksmith's. his punches were alright, his vocab was good but it was just lacking overall

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