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Old 05-21-04, 10:13 AM   #12
Aillight
Flyweight
 
Posts: 105
From: Florida
IP:

aight verses on both sides but I think that Blacksmith just got @ fine mind harder.

plus
"m der smashin your head with a slege hammer despratly, cause this bitch gets me down cuz he's so dim/"-fine mind
where is the rhyme?Maybe it's just me, n it's possible i missed it, so could u show me? Then when U rhymed words endin n -le with words like you n to it just seemed like u had to stretch 2 rhyme wit such easy words.No offense just a little advise, work on ur vocab n punches.