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Old 05-21-04, 09:40 PM   #24
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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I write my flows original, you just findin lyrics that r fuckin stolen/
tryin to rap like fifty, but bitin other peoples shit like Michael Bolton/
spittin so much fire got you walkin wit a black colon//
Call up DRE, but the doc cant help ya/
my blows fucked up ya system got ya lookin like Helta Skelta/

This is Croz's best part I think... Decent punches nice flow...the way the structure showed up looks fucked up but it looks worse than it really is.. all in all not too bad.

You're Tongue Couldn't Tear Shit Up If You SPOUT-CLAWS/ 5
I RE-ROUTE-JAWS, I'd Rap Like You But I Ain't ABOUT-FLAWS/ 6
Come MEET-YA-GOD And I'll BEAT-YA-SQUAD/ 7-
This was when I was sayin oh no, Beyond Logic bout rip this kid in 3 pieces and scatter him across my monitor...but then You used Jaws again in the next punchline...And the next bar flowed nicely but the punch didn't make sense to me, "Sheets with Saws" and "Free without a Pause"- Dont connect any wordplay for me, I dont see the punch or the meta if its there and I dont see it, Im sorry.. The last line though was a nice punch...All in all decent verse... Ima vote for BeyondLogic on this one, because I think you took it by a hair and a half....tight battle...1
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