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Old 05-21-04, 10:03 PM   #11
DirtBoy69
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^^my fault threads were left open so i'm letting it slide anyway here's my vote:

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:not really working for me, like it worked on a basic level but nothing too great 5/10

volcab:good job here but you don't score as high cause it wasn't used to help your flow 6/10

punches:not too many direct hard hittin lines best,"my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../" aside from that 6/10

overall:17/30 really not liking this verse i've seen so much beter

breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:a whole level better then accomplishment this week 7/10

volcab:nice good job here 6/10

punches:not the best i've seen from you but diffenatly better then accomplishment this week best line,"… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight" pretty good 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--shadow's edge
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league