i changed my title !!
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^^my fault threads were left open so i'm letting it slide anyway here's my vote:
breakdown for accomplishment:
flow:not really working for me, like it worked on a basic level but nothing too great 5/10
volcab:good job here but you don't score as high cause it wasn't used to help your flow 6/10
punches:not too many direct hard hittin lines best,"my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../" aside from that 6/10
overall:17/30 really not liking this verse i've seen so much beter
breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:a whole level better then accomplishment this week 7/10
volcab:nice good job here 6/10
punches:not the best i've seen from you but diffenatly better then accomplishment this week best line,"… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight" pretty good 7/10
overall:20/30
vote--shadow's edge
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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