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Old 05-22-04, 05:39 AM   #13
Kingz
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killed once so winnen again is a little defeat...
...this kids from urbana...
so i'm doin my part against the war in da middle east.../
6/10
this kid greets numbers, and shakes losses at the door...
fuck that it dosnt mean this kid has Mett - A - 4.../
6.5/10
tips on assault rifles leave dis kid wit hollow heads...
my verse embarrasses you and sheds some light on shadows edge.../
8/10 hot
i'm godly, accomplishment the hip hop jesus, ack like you havent heard dis...
and finally you that towel on ya head will be put some purpose.../
7/10
claim to be squeezin life outa rappers, basically jsut so you ca cum suck...
what i'm wonderin is how ya crew is still active, once ya headphones get unplugged.../
8/10

awsome structure like always

You – Godly? Took a style from Native… now his title too?
^ but its clear, text so ugly… even the godly dash away from you
hot 9/10
To have a chance you gotta fix that herb structure first
Oh wait, never mind, “…/” is the best part of your verse
hot shit yo 8/10
I hate to berate, but all this time… and that’s the best you create?
… lines so long, you must have been typing 5 days straight
lol pretty weak tho 6/10
It ain’t dedication that keep him writing without stop…
… just afraid of being knocked out if hit by writer’s block
7/10 nice
This league is mostly whackness, and you ain’t in the top percent
Shoulda no showed… cuz winning this battle is just no accomplishment
7/10

nice verse first couple of barz were hot

v/ shadow
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