I thank you both for your comments
and good looking
but da jakah im not sure what you meant by

ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...
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South Side Queenz..Holla
......DA Jokah......
But if you would read it
instead of just trying to look for rymes
You would see that it does.
Music is about expression
and I feel like
Im as good as any one els
but If you feel your better
you know what you can do home boy
i'll be here...first of all Im not a rookie
Second of all
you just didnt take the time to read it
I said I really didnt need a response
but i forgot....you only want it to ryme
hows this...cat mat hat bat...that sounds about right
if ryming is all its about to you
so think before you talk
most of all read and understrand it first
before you judge
LIKE I SAID I KEEP IT REAL
Im sorry if you take this the wrong way
but if you dont thanx for understanding
If you do thats your right to feel how you want
But im going to always keep it real

And young beezy
I feel what you said as well
but like I said before I keep it real.
yes it might have been done before ,
but not like me
because theres only one me
making it the only one in the world like it
And as far as the structure is concerned
we all got our own style
thats why God made us all different
but thanx fot your thoughts
I respect that..1 love
Keep hope alive

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none