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Old 05-24-04, 10:39 AM   #12
DFrost
Flyweight
 
Posts: 157
From: NY
IP:

aight, soul took this one, mad wordplay and some hot punches you gonna be dangerous if you elevate kid, the kennel line was fuckin weak, dont use approximate rhymes in text but that droppin mad dog like whinos killed it man, ur flow was insane, if u get better at flowin one punch to another like that, from punch to next set up without sacrificing the wordplay or punch u gonna elevate mad fast, style was unique, u get better at it u gonna be hot, right now u ain't up to much, but even enygma was weak when he first started this
Cuz souls gonna make you see(sea) slugs like aquatic life
I ll Decompose your structure as I numb and grind bones


mad dog, better than your last verse but still shaky on the punches, they pretty weak, u need to step it up man, still spittin basic verses

v/ soul