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due as soon as possible
normal rules
normal voting

Checkin in dawg ..................................

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I read ur last battle.. ur styles seems to be stuck on simple
Cuz I got (mad)dog stuck behind bar like a fuckin kinnle
All my punches nimble and quick but u get shot at twice
Cuz souls gonna make you see(sea) slugs like aquatic life
I ll Decompose your structure as I numb and grind bones
Cuz im know to be droppin mad dog like clumsy whinos /1
Im gonna make it obvious how you feel this match went
Cuz the only time MDs turnin heads is with drill attachments
Put clips through your cranium quick as I attack and shoot
Cuz Souls gonna stop M.D.(mad dog) like a malpractise suit /2




1) mad dog 20/20 is a brand of whine
2)MD/medical doctor... maddog... just making sure people got it


anything else you dont get just go ahead and ask and i will explain it.

Aight who am i facin...Soul of Satan HA HA Aight seems to me he's a lil deadly...obviously aint met me here we go

(Verse)
Aight dawg 10 line spit nine more to go so ima tell u Satan yo/
Soul u aint deadly my bubbly eyed pup got mo bite than this ho/
U aint a gangsta, u fall scrape ur knees and scream "I NEED A PLASTER"/
Why are you welcoming my pain ur like...
Like the quote...hope it makes you choke...bet u wish u aint spoke/
Better toke that bong coz ur only hope of winnin is breathin that smoke/
Lyrics i spit hit u then u melt quick thought u were real slick/
Bitch re-think got merked off my check list got u jiggy like Smith/
Like my boy Fine u gonn have trouble to rhyme u should try and bite/
Recite this last line coz these the last thing u'll see 4 i take ur life/

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I read ur last battle.. ur styles seems to be stuck on simple
Cuz I got (mad)dog stuck behind bar like a fuckin kinnle

^^ this flows and rhymes...but the punch is corny and played

I ll Decompose your structure as I numb and grind bones
Cuz im know to be droppin mad dog like clumsy whinos /1

^^ Too simple and played

Put clips through your cranium quick as I attack and shoot
Cuz Souls gonna stop M.D.(mad dog) like a malpractise suit /2

Creative...but punch isn't strong


Why are you welcoming my pain ur like...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Soul Of Satan
Hi disaster.

^^^^^^^ That segment there beats ur whole verse Satan...lol sorry...shit was mad funny



Like my boy Fine u gonn have trouble to rhyme u should try and bite/
Recite this last line coz these the last thing u'll see 4 i take ur life/

^^ dats funny as hell...and true


Vote: Mad Dog...way better punches and complexity

Uppin This Thread U Aint Wanna Be Sleepin On This Ma Fucka

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Got merked ha ha ill verse mad...

gud spit mate...upin this shit 4 ma man^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

soul of satan had a better verse. sorry mad dog but the quote wasn't enough. anyway here's the breakdown:

souls of satan's best lines:"All my punches nimble and quick but u get shot at twice
Cuz souls gonna make you see(sea) slugs like aquatic life"
stayed consistent with his personals
overall flow:7/10

mad dog's verse was jumpin everywhere. not consistent at all, needs to step up your punches and lyrics

mad dog's best lines:"Aight dawg 10 line spit nine more to go so ima tell u Satan yo/
Soul u aint deadly my bubbly eyed pup got mo bite than this ho/"
overall floe:5/10

aight battle but you both need to step up mad quick cuz i could kill both you at the same time. anyway keep on postin and gettin better. soul of satan held it down with is punches and floe. return the fava

vote=soul of satan

Crew vote removed

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I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

^^^^ are u retarded?

standard rules means no crew votes...and dats fucked up too...votin against FAM


aiyo MAD DOG...i'd see about dat shit...then, I'd get up in LMs ass for votin against u

Uppin this battle c'mon peeps aint no sleepin goin on up in here

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aight, soul took this one, mad wordplay and some hot punches you gonna be dangerous if you elevate kid, the kennel line was fuckin weak, dont use approximate rhymes in text but that droppin mad dog like whinos killed it man, ur flow was insane, if u get better at flowin one punch to another like that, from punch to next set up without sacrificing the wordplay or punch u gonna elevate mad fast, style was unique, u get better at it u gonna be hot, right now u ain't up to much, but even enygma was weak when he first started this
Cuz souls gonna make you see(sea) slugs like aquatic life
I ll Decompose your structure as I numb and grind bones


mad dog, better than your last verse but still shaky on the punches, they pretty weak, u need to step it up man, still spittin basic verses

v/ soul

rofl @ some of these kids saying i need to elevate. i have like 200 wins on my record, this was like a 3 minute keystyle, i dropped enough to win

Lyrical method, thanks for the vote, but if you think you can murk me, you need to pull your head out of your ass kid.

Thsts a lot for a newbie uppin this man some HONEST VOTES PLZ!!!

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