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Old 05-24-04, 01:29 PM   #13
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I hate to do this Lemme instil a lil truth in ya
KillaCamFlow?Ha!There aint one ounce of proof in ya

^^ decent opener

He tha carpenter of tha game....he loves to make tha bench
You too overrated...my sloppiest lines will make ya flinch

^^ funny
Like a virgin in good pussy he afraid to bust
One worsd of advice:dont even post...save the fuss

^^ it rhymes...decent...kinda played...pussy lines..ehh

During my first battle they sayed i was bad news//
If i use verse againist u it would make it to quick for you to Lose//

^^ blah

You mom tongue and ur votes relate because they are always Memorized//
You the badddest mc and ya in the weakest crew on this Website//
If it was not for the ass vote u would have been ko by N-Sight//

^^ TRUE...lol...but just a weak closer at best


Aiyo..both need to elevate in terms of complexity...up metas/wordplay..and use a more intricate rhyme scheme