10 lines
verse due in 20 mins
check in
no dr votes
no hating votes
no crew votes

Ok it been 20 mins.....

damn my bad I was in another battle...we cans still do it though...Il keystyle real quick

I hate to do this Lemme instil a lil truth in ya
KillaCamFlow?Ha!There aint one ounce of proof in ya
He tha carpenter of tha game....he loves to make tha bench
You too overrated...my sloppiest lines will make ya flinch
From "slappin-this-bitch" to "frontin his lines"
U better off stayin mute and throwin up signs
Son listen my lines will bust you all up in ya guts
Tha rappin version of Mr.Planters the way he on my nuts
Like a virgin in good pussy he afraid to bust
One worsd of advice:dont even post...save the fuss

Yo get this d/qed because we both were out of time zone and ...i got other battles set up

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nah...you PM'd me back and said you would post in like 2 days...so whats good

Iight give me like 10 mins iight?

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aiight fam and I got a partner if you still wanna tag team

Iight let do it ill set it up,but we gotta wait till some of my battles are closes got 5 open lol Vote on that battle while im writing my verse


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125515

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ayo black thief im killacamflow's cuzin he said his computer was messin up and he got school tomorrow so he will drop tomorrow sometime ~!1!~

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

During my first battle they sayed i was bad news//
If i use verse againist u it would make it to quick for you to Lose//
Im from the heart of New York,(The Ghetto)IM qucik to kill Goonz//
im use this,and break u in half like a Plastic Spoons//
My record is like the lakers winning series 4 - 2//
You gonna get knocked out just like i Ko Omega Blu//
I get people to see my verse,and gett my rhymes televised//
You mom tongue and ur votes relate because they are always Memorized//
You the badddest mc and ya in the weakest crew on this Website//
If it was not for the ass vote u would have been ko by N-Sight//

Iiight

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killa got it opn this 1. i wasn't really feelin either, but i think killa got it. the other dude jus needs to step the game up, but can anyone here hit this battle up. i wanna close my poles soon. peace!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125828

I hate to do this Lemme instil a lil truth in ya
KillaCamFlow?Ha!There aint one ounce of proof in ya

^^ decent opener

He tha carpenter of tha game....he loves to make tha bench
You too overrated...my sloppiest lines will make ya flinch

^^ funny
Like a virgin in good pussy he afraid to bust
One worsd of advice:dont even post...save the fuss

^^ it rhymes...decent...kinda played...pussy lines..ehh

During my first battle they sayed i was bad news//
If i use verse againist u it would make it to quick for you to Lose//

^^ blah

You mom tongue and ur votes relate because they are always Memorized//
You the badddest mc and ya in the weakest crew on this Website//
If it was not for the ass vote u would have been ko by N-Sight//

^^ TRUE...lol...but just a weak closer at best


Aiyo..both need to elevate in terms of complexity...up metas/wordplay..and use a more intricate rhyme scheme

aiight Ill take heed to ya advice...precitate it....more votes...