v/ LI.

More creative.. some fresh concepts too.. personals were generally used to good effect.. a tad stretched on some lines.. an your opener was kinda weak.. but you picked up an stayed consistant thereafter.. MC.. structure was bad.. 5 stand alone punches killed any chance of a flow.. punches were ineffective cos they coulda been for anyone.. `Jay-Z` line was worst.. minimal personals too.

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685

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