http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126475

^^ PlZ return the favor w/ honest vote yo


aiight

You want me to spit first cos you want somethin to feed off/
If thats the way you wanna play I call you the rap moth/

^^ decent punch...would have been better with better rhyming


You a lyrical masturbater who thought you'd try your luck, so dick you suck/
Down to the bone, like an ice-cream cone, come up an say it tastes like duck/
This wannabe ain't worth a fuck so instead of 10 I do 12 to irritate you cunt/
Jus to let you know that from all the rap labels you gona be shunned/

^^ NO NO NO NO..this is played and wack

20/40

u just bin to school,but ya "knowledge"is none,u want PROOF?...he rates him in front of jay-z!/
kid u bin sleepin,dreamin..u cnt beat me,eyes blurry n u la-zy/

^^ Nice personal...but the flow/rhyming don't match for some reason..hmm

ur lines all played, u spit 12 lines..broke tha rulez so ima beat u with 8/
spittin played gay linez..after u see this,u gona go home n masturb8.

^^ good closer...u didn't have to come hard at this cat


Vote: T storm...harder hitting verse.PERIOD