ok
house rules
10 linez
u spit first

Check in...umm...My schools jus about to finish. I'll post wen I get home in about half an hour or 45 minutes.

You want me to spit first cos you want somethin to feed off/
If thats the way you wanna play I call you the rap moth/
You an insect in the game, a nobody who got no name/
A shameless entertainer who cant reframe from insultin the rap game/
I'll tell you this again cos in the end you'll end up on the curb/
With ja and Irv, that twat from NERD and find you lookin for thirds/
You can't smoke me cos you ain't even on my radar i'm a slayer/
The one player in the game who ain't got haters so see ya later/
You a lyrical masturbater who thought you'd try your luck, so dick you suck/
Down to the bone, like an ice-cream cone, come up an say it tastes like duck/
This wannabe ain't worth a fuck so instead of 10 I do 12 to irritate you cunt/
Jus to let you know that from all the rap labels you gona be shunned/

u just bin to school,but ya "knowledge"is none,u want PROOF?...he rates him in front of jay-z!/
kid u bin sleepin,dreamin..u cnt beat me,eyes blurry n u la-zy/
cumin in here wit ya wack riddles,u tryina impress kids so u can kiddie-fiddle/
u riddle me that^^so ima riddle u this..n D2R play u like..piggie-in-tha-middle/
so go home get sum pre-written..coz i hit 14oz..u hit like a sparring-mit/
round 1 n i floor u,..coz i got shit-spitten,ima steam roll ya n u roll-in-shit/
ur lines all played, u spit 12 lines..broke tha rulez so ima beat u with 8/
spittin played gay linez..after u see this,u gona go home n masturb8.

riddle=
your verse was iight wit tha vocab. tha personals was good
and punch lines iight overall better....6/10

t-storm=
your verse was not really floin and your word play was prolly
tha best thing jus work on ya punch lines and ya vocab could
use sum workin on...4/10

Both of yall staup and keep advancin
nice spits

vote=riddlemethat

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close battle ya'll... im a give it to tstorm though. i think he came a bit harder and i felt his verse more. i liked tha personals he had, that woz tight. both verse were at tha same level which made tha battle close

vote = t storm

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aiight

You want me to spit first cos you want somethin to feed off/
If thats the way you wanna play I call you the rap moth/

^^ decent punch...would have been better with better rhyming


You a lyrical masturbater who thought you'd try your luck, so dick you suck/
Down to the bone, like an ice-cream cone, come up an say it tastes like duck/
This wannabe ain't worth a fuck so instead of 10 I do 12 to irritate you cunt/
Jus to let you know that from all the rap labels you gona be shunned/

^^ NO NO NO NO..this is played and wack

20/40

u just bin to school,but ya "knowledge"is none,u want PROOF?...he rates him in front of jay-z!/
kid u bin sleepin,dreamin..u cnt beat me,eyes blurry n u la-zy/

^^ Nice personal...but the flow/rhyming don't match for some reason..hmm

ur lines all played, u spit 12 lines..broke tha rulez so ima beat u with 8/
spittin played gay linez..after u see this,u gona go home n masturb8.

^^ good closer...u didn't have to come hard at this cat


Vote: T storm...harder hitting verse.PERIOD

Uppin for votes yall.
Keep 'em comin in.
Get this battle closed

nah man i liked riddlemethats better coz it had better flow, n he even threw multies in there, PRAISE!, his flow ok as well, overall it werent a bad spit but u could improve ya punches coz it aint all bout multies man.

t- storm i think u had sum good personals, the dis bout d2r was funny lol but i found it kinda hard to understand ya flow so ya structure needs workin on to, i werent feelin ya punches that much either man.
ur lines all played, u spit 12 lines..broke tha rulez so ima beat u with 8/
spittin played gay linez..after u see this,u gona go home n masturb8.
well the part bout gay lines in true, so that all good, but i think u should have thought of a better punch than go home n masturbate coz it just kills the flow but dun wrry u improvin hella lot from ya other writtens.
my= riddlemethat coz his structure n flow was better n he had multies, his punches werent all that but it was enough to take it. peace, vote on this battle plz, http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126445

uppin this for the fam, this is close in votes e-z...

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if i had to chose a winner it would be riddlemethat because he had way better structure and slightly better punches. I can tell that you both are new to this so i wont try and say you both suck cause that doesnt help either of you, but you should try to step up your game. What did you mean when RiddleMeThis said "that twat from NERD and find you lookin for thirds". Is that a diss on pharell because youd be stupid to discredit his talent.
And to t-Storm i think you verse was alright but try to get to the point faster.
Vote:riddle

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