outsider........your punches was good........but you could use some elevation.......you could wrok on re-wording your punches.......so that they hit harder.......work on your structure because your lines are uneven and it throws off your flow a little bit....but keep elevating man you got some potential

Kre-z.......I have deffintly seen some of your better shit......this was kinda not anything at all your punches was weak and i didnt really like your flow.......your structre was really off and it made your flow choppy.....keep elevating

v/outsider

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