I have fire in my words so u better run//
look what I have done I shoot this bitch with my gun//
now u are on the ground bleed'in and u started cry'in//
u r on that edge of death so u might be die'in//

^^^^^way too simple...elevate with more complex punches and set ups using metas and wordplay


you be claiming you'z a lover boy but homie to who?//
no one would want to go to the sack wit chu if u was a kangaroo//

you love to rap but you ain't at anyone on this site's level//
you ain't dope you can only be if you play in King Devil//

^^^punches kinda weak...but at least you threw them

Vote:Immortal...betta everything

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