sorry dawg forgot to make a poll

Lover Boy's drop:

I have fire in my words so u better run//
look what I have done I shoot this bitch with my gun//
now u are on the ground bleed'in and u started cry'in//
u r on that edge of death so u might be die'in//
so your dead I put yo body in a sack//
now yo body is on my back like a black backpack on my back(fresh off the rack)//
now the cops r on my tail I'm running 4 my life I'm also running in shock//
the cop stop me he said "what r u doing" I said nothing oops I drop my glock//
now I'm in jail I'm doing 5 to life//
I know I should of silt this bitches throte with uh knife//

Immortal_Souljah04 drop:

you be claiming you'z a lover boy but homie to who?//
no one would want to go to the sack wit chu if u was a kangaroo//

you love to rap but you ain't at anyone on this site's level//
you ain't dope you can only be if you play in King Devil//

blah! you ain't in a crew because no one wants you//
you just shit you should become Winnie The Pooh//

you should be located in Heaven but your not dead yet.......//
but you will be make u fall down a hole like we on Russian Roulette//

you don't deserve to battle a 8th Ðìsciple like me...//
can't follow up to me cuz i've been given beef tea//

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vote for this battle please

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

hey I will check out this battle when he drops but until then can someone check out this battle thnx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

the first one was his drop he already dropped in another thread but I
forgot to put a poll in the battle

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ok I saw it lover boy gets this one becuase his lyrics flowed and his opener to the closure put it all away and he had personels in their major. so my vote goes to loverboy
and plz hit up on my battle thnx

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

FACTS FOR PEOPLE WHO DO NOT UNDERSTAND MY DROP

1.) Kangaroos have a sack to carry stuff (youngs & stuff)
2.)King's Devil is a European Hawkweed
3.)Beef Tea is a extract of beef (given to people who are ill)

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Structure goes to Boy his was all spaced of 'n' shit...and eazy to read..Souljah'z punches were hard & ok...Boy'z punches were ok too but his was a little harder...so my vote goes to Lover Boy...

vote = Lover Boy

give this to immortal cus he focusd on attackin ratha than a story
hoLLa

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Ayo
tear it up lemme c u tear it up
all across the board we gonn tear it up
we gonna bounce it to the beat come off
we gonna rock this muthafukka till the wheelz fall off

keep it come'in

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kon vick mailbox [IMG]KON VICK

EMINEM's ^^^ Slim Shady lp

Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)

Immortal_Souljah04 gets da vote for have good personals, .

you be claiming you'z a lover boy but homie to who?//
no one would want to go to the sack wit chu if u was a kangaroo//
....Good Personal

Lover Boy had no personals but had many good punchs.

Return tha favo and vote on these.....

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vote on this battle


*** VOTE ON THIS ONE TO WRAP IT UP ***
Westbanka Radah vs Quick With

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I have fire in my words so u better run//
look what I have done I shoot this bitch with my gun//
now u are on the ground bleed'in and u started cry'in//
u r on that edge of death so u might be die'in//

^^^^^way too simple...elevate with more complex punches and set ups using metas and wordplay


you be claiming you'z a lover boy but homie to who?//
no one would want to go to the sack wit chu if u was a kangaroo//

you love to rap but you ain't at anyone on this site's level//
you ain't dope you can only be if you play in King Devil//

^^^punches kinda weak...but at least you threw them

Vote:Immortal...betta everything

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aight well uppin 4 votes need a lot more...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aight come on people uppin 4 votes needa lot more votes come on!!!!

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