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Old 06-04-04, 12:52 AM   #18
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lover boy ya verse was pretty weak i seen nothing that interested me at all just alot of babling goin on...work on punches and personals man cuz none of yours were good...your structure was off...and bars were stretched and forced...your verse came out really weak and you need to elevate a lot

I.S your verse was decent it wasnt that hott but the opener and the russian roulette bars won this battle for you... i think you need to elevate and use harder punches yours were decent but not too hott...and your closer was weak cuz you was talkin about yourself and your crew that isnt a good closer but this battle is yours cuz lover is just weak

vote: I.S

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