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here is da breakdown

N-Sight: you had a nice verse, ure structure was top and you kept everything relatively the same length, nuthin too stretched. u had a gud flow from start to finish and u stayed on topic all the way through. there was a lot of feeling i think in ure drop and u had some nice wordplay in places but it got a bit basic near to the middle. gud topical tho, i liked the storytelling, very nice...OVERALL 8/10

UnHoly: you to had a nice verse, ure structure was not the best with some lines stretched and that messed up ure flow a lot which got choppy near to the end of ure drop. i don't think that u had as much feeling in ure drop as n-sight and i think he told a better story. u didn't have that much gud wordplay becuz mainly it was basic and overall i think u cud have done better...OVERALL 7/10

V/ - N-Sight

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