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06-02-04, 08:50 PM
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The Truth
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Topical=Wun Vs. Sight
IP: B682 856F
No line max
Pick one of these Topics 1.Mayor of a Uprising City. 2.General in War.
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06-02-04, 08:51 PM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 330E C5C2
lol...already set it up...be we can use yours...and I choose #2
and i assume u'll write on the same topic... 30 Line MAX no crew/bs/dr/hate votes 1..i'll have my verse up by tomorrow morning |
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06-02-04, 08:52 PM
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The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Close urs.
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06-02-04, 08:53 PM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 330E C5C2
already done....so if u agree on the rules n topic #2...then g'luck
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06-03-04, 07:15 AM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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General Hagen
IP: E8B1 CCE8
General Robert Hagen gives his testimony to the Chariman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff after the Vietnam War.
November 11, 1979: General Hagen recounts one enounter with hostile forces... The platoon was stuck deep in the bush..scorpions crawling-
Wasps overhead buzzing..the many stung started falling- Smoke spiraled between soldiers..we advanced through the harsh- Private Ross caught a stinger..his bowels lingered in the marsh- The mission..to secure a field then listen for relief- Our position..about 1 mile shy of a field known as 'Grief'- We forged ahead dodging mines..flies whizzing by our ears- Cries of fear..shots around us dried our many tears- Then, we stumbled upon a child..with a gun, and a stone- For a heart..when he cocked, Private Brock sent him home- Cold, we picked up the pace..rippin' and slashin' through the jungle- Tossin' grenades to clear space..everything was like a jumble- A blur of reality..we were half-way to our destination- And half the squad was wasted..so there was much hesitation- But, we had to blaze a trail for the 2nd company.."Come with me"- I hollered to the men in front of me.."Don't stop dumpin' heat!"- The odor was fetid like dead skin..wet grass and sanitation- As we ascended to the field..the enemy's hand was awaitin'- About 50 men sprayin'..shells clipped we fell like dominoes- They held me until my rescue..now I'm tellin' all I know- Mission: INCOMPLETE uh pz. |
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06-03-04, 02:12 PM
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The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
April 17th 1861 (Civil War Battle at Ramey Field)
As I lead my Men on to the Dewed Field of another Battle.. Men Tired and HomeSick i think of plans as i sit in my Saddle.. I hear the Banging of Drums and the Shouts of Orders.. Were heavily out Numbered on the Southern Boarders.. As we Post postions Along a fence in a Small Field.. I see the Blue and there sign to Stop and Yield.. For here is were We Lay Blood On this Gloomy Day.. They look so Deadly as i watch them with little to Say.. As i tell my Men to Steadfast and Be Strong as the Fight.. I give them 1 chance to Leave as there God Given Right.. As i Signal My Men to Fire i hear the Crack of Gun-Shots.. I never knew untill this Battle when ur Fight Blood Runs-Hot.. I Fired into the Main Squad as My Men Seemed all to Fall.. I told my Men to Stall them As i took My Long Shooters behind a Wall.. Slowly we started to Take a Advatantage with the Help of Cover.. But my 1st man fell it wouldnt have been so bad but....It was my Brother.. I told my Men to Charge as we Ran into the Bullet Filled War Zone.. As Guns were Blown wether we would make it was UnKnown.. We were Met with a Line of Marksman and Dropped our Front-Line.. We took there First and Second Line's as We headed for the Back.. But i Felt My Heart Drop when i Heard that Loud Crack.. As i fell to the Ground I see Dim Lighting start to Fade.. As i wake up i see my Men got Bombarded by a 2nd Raid.. I Look down to See My Stomach Bloody and My Legs WithDrawn.. As my Family Lays me to Rest a Fallen General My Soul is Long Gone..
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06-03-04, 02:47 PM
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RV AUDIOS BEST
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IP: 7402 EED9
ok claery elevated battle topical
um the verse by un holy one good metas but they wornt great and they werea lil hard to desipher um i like the overall story but it lacked it overall felling nsight- the metas where there and the feeling i loved the keep dumpin heat line that brought out the real felling of war in my eyes good shit man for real un holy one that was hot to hard to deside v/ n-sight just a tad bit more felling return the favor link in the sog
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06-03-04, 02:48 PM
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RV AUDIOS BEST
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IP: 7402 EED9
um it wont let me poll a vote i have over 300 posts ok this is gay
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06-04-04, 02:56 AM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 72B2 986D
c'mon yall...uppin for votes...
holla atcha boyee with explained vote 1 |
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06-04-04, 11:59 AM
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***Man Down***
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IP: B6DF 2706
.::N-Sight::. i like your verse better b/c you showed more heart. i like your imagination, you write shit that niggas actually see when they at war, in the trenches and shit. unholy wun your verse was ill to but it was so fuckin long i got bored, but i read the whole shit anyway, it was god better than i can do but .::N-Sight::. killed you with imagination.respect
vote=.::N-Sight::.
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06-04-04, 12:27 PM
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The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Nice D/R Uppin Honost votes.
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06-04-04, 01:00 PM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: BC16 1729
^^^ here we go with the bitchin...nebody who ain't a hater or an idiot can see my verse is superior...ne way...stop tryna sway voters and let the votes speak...
and after i beat ur ass...i don't wanna hear nothin from u bitch...u got me? |
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06-04-04, 01:20 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 1ECF 8460
aight
here is da breakdown N-Sight: you had a nice verse, ure structure was top and you kept everything relatively the same length, nuthin too stretched. u had a gud flow from start to finish and u stayed on topic all the way through. there was a lot of feeling i think in ure drop and u had some nice wordplay in places but it got a bit basic near to the middle. gud topical tho, i liked the storytelling, very nice...OVERALL 8/10 UnHoly: you to had a nice verse, ure structure was not the best with some lines stretched and that messed up ure flow a lot which got choppy near to the end of ure drop. i don't think that u had as much feeling in ure drop as n-sight and i think he told a better story. u didn't have that much gud wordplay becuz mainly it was basic and overall i think u cud have done better...OVERALL 7/10 V/ - N-Sight
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06-04-04, 05:24 PM
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IP: 08ED 5536
aight nice topical battle ya is on fiyah no doubt..
holy- u had nice flwo structure..and nice multies and punches.... sight-u had nice punches vocab..wordplay..flow and structure.. ncie battle ya is on fiya both yall did good but i think.... v/N sight got this by a bit but nice verse unholy wun u fiya hoime boi easy niggas wun
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06-05-04, 09:22 AM
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IP: 970D 9C87
dayum this was a good batttle
n-sight ur shit was sick i was feelin ur vocab and word play...and the imagery was crazy i could accually picture that shit...and your introductyion/opener was hot as heyll good shit family topcail also good shit but ur shit wasnt as sick as N-sights n-sight used more vocab then u..and his imagery was way better....i could jus picture his shit accually happining more then i could picture your shit happening...but i was feelin ur ending...but ensight jus edged u out in every way by a lil bit
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