I can see yo words thrugh yo mouth u ready to spit/
when u rap yo style is like die'in in my sleep I don't fell it;
to me this is a battle not a friendzy/
because yo words and punches don't torment me;


^^ weak and too simple...stop using the word YO for your...NOW...lol

up complexity with metas and wordplay...not real good


listen faggot iv u eva try chokin me wid yo dick//
ile make sure your vains pop when i snap ya bones like a stick//
and iv u dont feel my style youle sure feel the crunch//
of ya brain when i eat it infront of you for lunch//
yea i wont even give you time to decay //

^^ still simple...but, this at least hits your opponent unlike his verse to you...work on complexity by being more creative with punches

Vote: Killa ac