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Old 06-05-04, 12:27 PM   #11
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King...the use of a quote by your opponent works only when it's self incriminating. Trouble speaks in the 3rd person which suggests he was talking about someone else. So, that gag didn't work bro, sorry.


I’ll bust ure nose cuz that’s the only way you’ll get anything flowing
You cud take 20 laxatives and ure ass still couldn’t get any shit going
You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight
Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight

^^ Decent punches...some kinda played..e.g., laxative lines...


U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board
Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record

^^ Dartboard was good visual but weak...2nd punch was good but the rhyming sucked

Inconsistent verse in my opinion King...20/30


I'll ring ya neck, I don't hesitate to swing at vets
It's like we're playin' chess the way Trouble got King in check
Fuck what Hova said, i'm throwin' rocks at the throne
I'll crack up ya skull just to give you an extra funny bone


^^ dawg, you could have won this battle had you come with a little more complexity
Looks like you got in a fight with the Caps Lock when you were making your name
Now in my third week, King aint playin on my stereo
Why?
Blacks don't wanna hear K three times in a row

^^ And, work on your flow. This shit sounds like you're talking, not rapping.

18/20

King...you barely eeked this one out


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