props to both lyricists on this one, as always, thank you for coming out.

Strini-I see in you a combination of inexperience, and ignorance to a.content and b.sense-making. I can already tell what style you like. but the problem is the fact that you are trying to use a style you haven't mastered or fully understood. the use of vocab is always nice. But sentence to sentence has to connect and mean something for it to truly be ill. You can't take the best parts of a painting and make one great one. IT all has to make sense and this is what you lacked. sense. i also see a bit of corniness as well(i am not dissing you at all, i just call it as i see it, so you can elevate)
I rip my way through mcee`s...no way?//
Way...like a paper mache and its okay//
that was a little corny. I think you should do what i SHOULD be doing, and that is get your feet wet with weaker emcees. I have made the mistake of battling vets as a newbie, and it's not good for ya record.(plus vets pray on innocent newbies for better records, lol) Just practice + full analysis of the lyricism aspect of the style you like and you'll be great in the future. Because i can already see potential of illness in you.

Soul Skripts-I've witnessed greats from you, and i damn near want to hate on you for battling this one. lol. but i can't. I saw a noticeable feeling of, i'll win this anyway, so i'm not even worried. this wasn't a serious battle, and i haven't seen one in a long time, because vets won't battle each other as much as they battle newbs. but i must admit this was a decent verse, and was just enough to get over.
easy readable structure, nice punches, made sense.

best of luck to both lyricists, though and much respect.

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