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Old 06-09-04, 07:21 AM   #6
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aight...night crawla...at first your verse was alright...decent rhymes...you had one that made me laugh and stood out and it was this

No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/

that was funny..but it was really your only decent punch...your use of multies was not good...and I felt you really fell off in the 2nd half of your verse...anyways


Big kountry....your opener...i didn't like it...but the rest of the verse was pretty hot...good structure..good personals...very very good closer...your verse was way better than Night crawlers....anyways...respect to both of you...lets all elevate and shake hands


vote: kountry
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