10 lines you first
you made the rules lets go

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i said 10-20 lines soo hurrs mah spit..

bigkountrys days arent too jolly, jumps on the mic and everyone goes to ~bed~/
My verbal nouns hit him harder then him as a baby gettin dropped on his ~head~/
No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/
I'm hittin you round like a ball in ~lacross~, and nailin you to a ~cross~/
You couldn't spit hot shit if you tried to be black and puked out ~hot sauce~/
Ima ~provoke you~ till i ~smoke you~/
Hit you hard like the bong i ~toke to~/
Then ~choke you~, like Bush on a pretzel, shit I ~broke you~/
the only shit you cocked back was a pillow in a ~pillow fight~/
the only time you came close to getting in trouble with the police is when you fed pigs, ~right?~/
ur numba one hobby isnt to rap its to ~fly kites~/
bitch if u had a girl she'd become a nun after ur ~honeymoon night~/
im way out ur league nigga ~cant u see~/
im in the highest degree, i'll burn ya, ~dont fuck with me!~/

iight spit mayne

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ok thats mah spit...uppin for bigkountrys verse..spit ya shit...then we needz votes afta he spits

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wow...... another easy one


multiple words with multiple meanings yet it really takes no skill,
you got rhymes for days but I saw through your little paper-mill,
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since,
Subbed for rental, tease this retard for money and run ya dentals,
So when Kountry makes fun of you... it's only fund-da-mentals,
Maybe he thinks that he's ill, but it'd still be a stretch to say witty...
Like how you need to fix your ~structure~ ...cuz it still looks real shitty!,
Complex yet..... simple.. i sample your style godly,
This so u can say ^
..... Ha! nice personal you got me !

Merked Haha

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uppin for some votes word

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aight...night crawla...at first your verse was alright...decent rhymes...you had one that made me laugh and stood out and it was this

No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/

that was funny..but it was really your only decent punch...your use of multies was not good...and I felt you really fell off in the 2nd half of your verse...anyways


Big kountry....your opener...i didn't like it...but the rest of the verse was pretty hot...good structure..good personals...very very good closer...your verse was way better than Night crawlers....anyways...respect to both of you...lets all elevate and shake hands


vote: kountry

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idk i kinda liked nitecrawlas betta but i cant vote cuz i dont got 20 posts sooo....peace

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uppin for votes

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bigkountrys days arent too jolly, jumps on the mic and everyone goes to ~bed~/
My verbal nouns hit him harder then him as a baby gettin dropped on his ~head~/
No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/


^^ Pretty funny opener...good punches...however, the baby drop line is rather immature-ish at best...

ur numba one hobby isnt to rap its to ~fly kites~/
bitch if u had a girl she'd become a nun after ur ~honeymoon night~/
im way out ur league nigga ~cant u see~/
im in the highest degree, i'll burn ya, ~dont fuck with me!~/

^^..ur style isn't bad at all. You have creative metas and wordplay in your punches. You need to work on a more exciting rhyme scheme, and making those creative punches hit harder.


20/30

multiple words with multiple meanings yet it really takes no skill,
you got rhymes for days but I saw through your little paper-mill,
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since,

^^ Nice lines...the lie-since line won this battle for you

BIG, your style isn't bad. I think you need to up the complexity of your references w/metas.


24/30


Vote: BIG

thanks for the feeback uppin this for more

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ok it like dis on only flow big would win on style she would win too.
on punches night would win cause hers were just out there but her personals were better.opener night closer close the battle on night and big won

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uppin 4 votes

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I think crawla took this one but only becouse Kountry had writters block. no real Mcs try to ryme wit the word shitty unless its used against some one who once used such a fucked up word in the first place. Perhaps he just sliped and pressed the post butten by mistake or some shit. I dont know.

"Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since,"
crappy use of words and plus it dont ryme. I've honestly tried it wit atleast five different accent and its still bullshit.

"multiple words with multiple meanings yet it really takes no skill,
you got rhymes for days but I saw through your little paper-mill,"
I almost laught at this one, but only on the inside. it end up being a disapointment after all.

Crawler started ok and ended kinda bad. He switched his style at the end and payed for it.
"No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/"
This one made me smile, again I thought wetha or not to laugh. The shit was too long. But good.

all in all. my vote goes to Nitecrawla

also vote on my battle wit WillNova @t

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128842

Only honest votes count.

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I would have to go with kountry because night crawla fell off after the beginning, just started saying things that rhymed no real punches or good wordplay