bigkountrys days arent too jolly, jumps on the mic and everyone goes to ~bed~/
My verbal nouns hit him harder then him as a baby gettin dropped on his ~head~/
No One wants to rap wit him, thats why he sits on a computer a ~loner~/
He couldn't reply harder then me if he typed his verse with a ~boner~/


^^ Pretty funny opener...good punches...however, the baby drop line is rather immature-ish at best...

ur numba one hobby isnt to rap its to ~fly kites~/
bitch if u had a girl she'd become a nun after ur ~honeymoon night~/
im way out ur league nigga ~cant u see~/
im in the highest degree, i'll burn ya, ~dont fuck with me!~/

^^..ur style isn't bad at all. You have creative metas and wordplay in your punches. You need to work on a more exciting rhyme scheme, and making those creative punches hit harder.


20/30

multiple words with multiple meanings yet it really takes no skill,
you got rhymes for days but I saw through your little paper-mill,
Brass knuckles Per-mitt, still couldnt Drive a hard punch bitch,
State ID card say'n ur dope, ... haven't seen a worst Lie-since,

^^ Nice lines...the lie-since line won this battle for you

BIG, your style isn't bad. I think you need to up the complexity of your references w/metas.


24/30


Vote: BIG