VIP

this guy really is fuckin disgrace/
he so fat he got strech marks on his face/
Nice opener...alright punch..7/10
your rhymes ~suck really fuckin bad/
i ~fucked your mom so legally i'm your dad/
nice punch here... overall 7/10
your rhymes are wat u ~fuckin lacka/
get to~suckin how am i battlen this fudgepacka/
umm it was alright but the Lacka thingy wasnt hot 5/10
my rhymes will ~put u in a body bag/
on your ~foot u will be rockin a death tag/
not bad.. little played... 6/10
my mouth is tha ~gun and these rhymes are ammuntion/
i aint doin this for ~fun u wanna be like me bitch stop wishin
nice closer... overall 8/10

yo, this guy's fuckin gay and his puches are out played/
thats played.... and there was nothin rhymin wit it.. 3/10
your a dickhead aswell as a mutha fuckin little joke-head/
i'll sever your thoughts of mind in fucking little peices of shred/
Ummm wackness here.. need some elevation 4/10
You might aswell be a tape recorder, cuz ur just a immitator/
a backstabbin trator, wid not one mate, worse den an outsider/
Immitator and outsider dont rhyme... 3/10
like me, o! you forgot to mention my name, don't it'll make u damned/
like a curse spell makin ur testicals fall, ur brain 2 dat makes u dum-den/
i'll drown u in sorrow and won't even be sorry, n u'll need to get rum-den/
Dum-Den??? Rum-Den??? wtf WACK 3/10 for trying
this guy couldn't win a battle, i'll give him heat failure when he startles/
reading state of da art, and makes him look like a tart wid specticals/
Startles and specticals dont rhyme... kinda wack aswell 4/10

As you can see VIP took this with his better punches.. better flow..non-stretched lines....and writing in english....

Overall vote goes to VIP for not being wack lol..

Outsider elevate more man ive seen some of ure weak ass shit and i can tell your trying but u need to practice more.. try out the cyphers...