40- honestly this was a boring verse...Nsight this and Nsigh that...every sentence doesnt have to say nsight. You got multies here and there...but it flowed very slow i guess because of the word usage. up your vocab a little bit. You need to elevate, there is no need to describe your punches....and the one you had explained i had already caught on to it...when i first read it.

nsight- Funny verse. that gives you plus points. word usage made your verse flow better...them other voters don't know what they are talkin about. better punches especially the first two punches....no signs of a beginner you have elevated and it is highly noticeably...good verse and pretty decent....

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