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30 min. blind spit

oince you check in...we both have 30 minutes to drop

Aight checking in.................................

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iight iight datz wutz good... dis lookz like a battlle lets go lolz

mhuahhaaaaa...walks in...sees comp...LMAO

Aiyo, 1st off

Kid, this battle ain't costin' me shit..imma Win Free like Oprah-
Ur ass packed like Full House..that's where all the men play poker-
Each one gets 40 hits..ur Caliber lacks the power to knock me out-
Pm'n for adivce..even if I gave you the KEY u still couldn't lock me out-
Fuck your fake ass Jesus crew lackin' 4 disciples..ur style is triflin'-*
U couldn't break my flow if u went thru and added a thousand hyphens-
Ur style is typin' wack battles..I've seen more personals in confessionals-
Ur verses are detestable..and u got the nerve to call yourself a professional-
Herb, that's laughable..done beat so many in ur squad I dunno who is who-
2nd..........3rd.........4th disciple?..fuck it, I'll just merk your whole crew-
Startin' with you..every fuckin' line u rhyme is Filler trying to shine-
I dunno what's longer..FIND MIND's losing streak or your wide lines-
I'll rewind back to when you were wack..oops, we're still in this moment-
U slow bitch..this battle is like my dick, and once again kid you've blown it-



I'm looking for cream that prevents fungus from having my nuts to grow on-**


FUCK OUTTA HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUR!


*...HIs crew is 8 disciples...Jesus had 12
**He's asked me 100000 times to join his crew

hott battle...

40caliber nice verse..but you started off really wack your first 3 bars were just weak.. you had some good punches but like 1 personal and just some flips about his name which everyone does when they battle sight so far...you had some good multies too and decent flow your structure was choppy tho...

overall : 6.5/10

n sight your verse was jus hott...i think u started off kinda weak like 40 did but you picked up your pace fast and just murdered this kid with your verse....good punches and decent personals perfect structure consistent flow multies and wordplay werent aas good as 40's tho

overall : 7.5/10

vote: n-sight

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40 cali- man that was a hot drop but i didnt like how you outlined your finsher in bold that kinda thruogh me off punches were ok but the lack of personals did you in man your punches were hot but when you battle 40 you got to incorperate some hot personals to make you punches more efective

n- man your punches where ok but nothing spectaular but you had a mas amount of personals that made me chuckle in my seat word 40's punches were better but your verse made me luagh more at 40 and his crew good spit

v/ N- for havin funny personals

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40-aight you opened kinda wack....rest of the flow was nice..you threw
some nice punches didnt really have personals, but your finisher lacked..
even though you had some good wordplay it hurts your flow when you dont open and
close out a battle hott

6.5/10

N-Sight
you threw some nice punches and had some nice personals too..
ya had some humor up in there and thats always a plus
your flow overall was just better...

7.5/10

vote=N-sight

ight dis was a gd battle. 40 and nsight, u 2 were gully but i fink 40 gets dis 1. hes punches connected.

fav line: NSight No One Listens to u, You more ignored than a Jehovah Witness

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always ready 4 a challenge

40- honestly this was a boring verse...Nsight this and Nsigh that...every sentence doesnt have to say nsight. You got multies here and there...but it flowed very slow i guess because of the word usage. up your vocab a little bit. You need to elevate, there is no need to describe your punches....and the one you had explained i had already caught on to it...when i first read it.

nsight- Funny verse. that gives you plus points. word usage made your verse flow better...them other voters don't know what they are talkin about. better punches especially the first two punches....no signs of a beginner you have elevated and it is highly noticeably...good verse and pretty decent....

v/Nsight

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B.P.

Lamo....aight I'm takin advice & running wit it....."EyesNeverSleeping"

This was a hot battle for real

40Cal: you did good but ya structure was real stretched out. Try shortin out ya bars. Explain some of ya punches cuz i didnt get some of them

N-Sight: ya verse was good everything flowed good. Punches was good and you had a good structure.

vote:N-Sight

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