Ready-You verses was stretched but you took this by punches
Some came weak but hit hard enought to beat him..SImilies
was put in there a lil bit and some metaphores..no multies
or personals leavin balance low

Etcetera-You had better structure was you verse didnt hit
hard enough..You had a lil bit of metaphores but the
rest was weak..keep elevatin for both

v/R4W

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