10 lines min
20 lines max
check in then 20 minutes to spit
doesnt matter who goes first

check in.. bout to drop

...................................lets go............................

etcetera with a keyboard is a marvel team up
the angry emcee from ct thatll come and bomb your scene up

from east coast to west coast my rhymes stay wet
ready 4 war talks out his ass like eddie murphy in shrek

etcetera changed the game theres alot at stake
i smoke weed and fuck bitches there now ready 4 war can relate

dont ask me bout the state of keystyles its the same song
aint no problem with it its just that ready 4 war is doin it wrong

thats far from my concern i just hit the keys and burn
with my deadly tactics ready 4 war stay home and practice

...i left a pause there for you to maybe dare
ladies stare at the puerto rican kid with the faded hair

your rhymes at nothin but a game to me
whatever you claim to be.. is pocket change to me

Ece ya need to elevate some........urmm and sorry rhyme just elevate some...iight u will be tight

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Yo in a minute you gonna really hate me- your style dont intimidate me//
Your not being victimised or criticised its just the facts is yo jewellary aint never been crystalised//
Messin with me heres the low down-Your lookin to be number 1, When really one day my name will be on that crown//
Like Dre said ''Whats the difference between me and you?''- After this 100% of the population behind me then were threw//
Putting a front on about smokin weed-but you and drugs aint gonna blossom just like a fertalized seed//
I ask you do u know the deffinition of pain? its not masturbating so hard just to get a the tyniest stain//
your ball sack is never gonna see the light of day...except when your bellend starts to rot and even the doctor says put it away//
This is the first of many im gonna make a list, take you name into consideration- just abreviate it,,,ETC you get the jist //
One hit and youll be in a state-worse than the penetration your mum feels of your brother but hey thats just fate//
so this is my recognition of a true fighter you never give up act black and shout in the street wassup//

start the votes .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

flow-ready
structure-etc
personals-ready
punches-ready

vote=ready

aight the first guy difnt have enough punches and thats where i think ready came harder on punches it was a week battle but i suppose it was an ok newb battle laterz !

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

Ready-You verses was stretched but you took this by punches
Some came weak but hit hard enought to beat him..SImilies
was put in there a lil bit and some metaphores..no multies
or personals leavin balance low

Etcetera-You had better structure was you verse didnt hit
hard enough..You had a lil bit of metaphores but the
rest was weak..keep elevatin for both

v/R4W

Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129346

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upin 4 votes ..............................................

ETC-



^^^ this line was weak....it was too obvious



not a great start



^^^^ was that a punch? u sorta complimented him.

Overall ur punches came weak but i liked ur structure
and ur flow.

Ready-



That wasnt a punch.... it wasnt even a personal. When u make stuff up make it creative and funny.



^^^ No real sold punches in there.

[QUOTEThis is the first of many im gonna make a list, take you name into consideration- just abreviate it,,,ETC you get the jist //
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That was a nice punch.

Ready you wernt consistent with ur punches either. None of them were really solid but they were solid enough to edge out my vote.Work on your structure too. Dont give up tho, keep practicin and i have no doubt youll get real good.

vote= ready

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etcetera you suck

vote/r4w

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The Legacy

Its Only Getting Better

ready..ur lines were stretched but u took it wit punches and personals
etcetera..u need to elevate ur verse is to simple
v/r4w

return da favor wit honest votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129293

uppin for the final vote ........................................