ETC-
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from east coast to west coast my rhymes stay wet
ready 4 war talks out his ass like eddie murphy in shrek
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^^^ this line was weak....it was too obvious
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etcetera with a keyboard is a marvel team up
the angry emcee from ct thatll come and bomb your scene up
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not a great start
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etcetera changed the game theres alot at stake
i smoke weed and fuck bitches there now ready 4 war can relate
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^^^^ was that a punch? u sorta complimented him.
Overall ur punches came weak but i liked ur structure
and ur flow.
Ready-
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Yo in a minute you gonna really hate me- your style dont intimidate me//
Your not being victimised or criticised its just the facts is yo jewellary aint never been crystalised//
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That wasnt a punch.... it wasnt even a personal. When u make stuff up make it creative and funny.
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Messin with me heres the low down-Your lookin to be number 1, When really one day my name will be on that crown//
Like Dre said ''Whats the difference between me and you?''- After this 100% of the population behind me then were threw//
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^^^ No real sold punches in there.
[QUOTEThis is the first of many im gonna make a list, take you name into consideration- just abreviate it,,,ETC you get the jist //
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That was a nice punch.
Ready you wernt consistent with ur punches either. None of them were really solid but they were solid enough to edge out my vote.Work on your structure too. Dont give up tho, keep practicin and i have no doubt youll get real good.
vote= ready