Street-
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C.M.F.S, Coward Missin Formal Structure//
scorned u suckas, i run u ova like stormin truckas//
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A so so opening
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[ leave ya brains open so i can expand ya knowledge//
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Probably ur best line.... very creative
[QUOTE]i been through insane battles, u scarred for life like stained statues//
fuck ya feet i give u brain shackles, this battle is just a main tackle//
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Kinda a weak ending to a so so verse.
Overall you had nice stucture and flow but the punches wernt that solid and creative.
CMFS-
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i'm sick of this mutha fuckin fake MC
you there who continious to post against me
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^^^ ur verse consisted mostly of lines like this so im not gunna waste my time and write them out. You just need to keep practicin and tryin to make up hard punches to throw at ur opponents. On a lighter not i do see potential and overall u kept a decent flow and simple structure. In the end tho my vote goes to street for harder punches.
vote= street