Rascal-You had a few lines but mainly was weak..
You took this By some and im going to show you why
you had similies and little bit of metaphores and all
structure was decent
Potential-Your autograph book line id played as ish..
You switched up the word becuz it was year book so mainly that
lines was played..And plus you came a slight weaker theb him
Nuff said...
v/Rascal for having everything slight better
Return the favor Please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129100