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Old 06-14-04, 01:42 PM   #7
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Dread:
N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"...
Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb...
^FIRST LINE GREAT SECOND WAS OK IT HAD GOOD FLOW^^8/10
Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt...
The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...*
PRETTY GOOD LINE.. SOUNDS ORIGINAL 8/10
Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought...
You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out...
NICE WORDPLAY GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCH 8/10
Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning...
If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...**
MORE GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE CONCEPTZ 7/10 ^
You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches...
You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...***
^^ NICE FLOW SOUNDS FAIRLY ORIGINAL 7/10^^
Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"...
Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite...
FIRST LINE WAS TIGHT! SECOND WAS SORTA PLAYED 7.5/10
OVERALL 45.5 / 60.0

N-SIGHT

I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off-
Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all-
^^ IT WAS ALRIGHT.. BUT NOT GREAT NOT GOOD RHYMING 6/10
I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind-
Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme-
GREAT WORDPLAY NOT BAD FLOW AND GOOD PUNCH 8/10
You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open-
Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'-
NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCH..GOOD 8/10
U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best-
Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep-
^^ AVERAGE WITH A PLAYED CONCEPT.. MEH 7/10
I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten-
But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin-
GOOD ENDING.. BUT BRINGING IN LATIN KITTEN WAS IRRELIVENT... 6/10
fuck otta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!
^^ QUIT SAYIN THAT IT KINDA ANNOYING DAWG...
OVERALL 37/60 MY VOTE GOES TO DREADED FOR HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND BETTER FLOW
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