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Old 06-16-04, 12:16 PM   #7
Poppa Kap
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lol^...u got here first. Ill drop my vote anyways.[FONT]

Quote:
Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course//
he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board//
Could of had nice wordplay with the image line. But like DeLeon said, its not really a diss

fuck praisin him, give him the 21 gun salute//
his name is solo, but hes always lookin to join local crews//
Nice play off his name and works as a personal

u on legendary status, but no one mentions u/
ur skills is like ur avatar nigga, 1 dimensional//
was ok

u think if u leave, anybody will remember u/
yea i guess u aint notice cuz u was hangin on nsights testicles//
Personal. Good.

get over it, the dude left, might i mention//
that writin the rules like that is the only way ull be the center of attention//
Again this word play could have been worded better but I still got it and liked it. Not very strong tho

uve been in denial, u kno the fuckin truth//
that lyrikal destruktion was destructed cause of u//
.....ok..basic

ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this//
so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/
and jus before finish//
wack

might i add//
that all ur fuckin threads are jus, "i love nsight ads"//
wack

nsight this nsight that, all u do is bitch and whine//
and dont forget about the time/
that when u battled jpoll, ur breath reeked of other ppls lines//
Personal. But is it true? Use a link in future.

solo i can finish here,cuz ur ass is fuckin toast/
now ur mouth should and threads should be identical, both of em closed!!!//
Needed re wording but nice closer but not very strong.[B]


{FONT=Tahoma]I would say this had a couple of good personals and wordplay with potential but it wasnt a very strong verse. I would give it about 5/10.



Quote:
Originally Posted by KiNg SoLo
I’m a size this bitch up and beat his ass in a flash…
Ain’t gotta say shit, he already admits he’s trash…
[B]Playin off his title. Basic but ok

Lookin at ure avatar, I thought I’d seen u before…
Shit I’m in there to, I’m sorry for breakin ure jaw…
wack

Listen up u bitch cuz I’ve got-a-ass-whoopin-4-u…
Stop looking downstairs, ain’t no dick suckin 4 u…
Paying off his name but it seemed weird. I get ur sayin he is gay buy it just was nufin special.

Not only dick suckin this bitch likes to study ass…*
Tryin to drop hot shit but keeps on blowing gas…
Played but ok wordplay.

Tie me up and blindfold me, u still cudn’t get the kill…
When this line alone just fuckin defines all ure skill…
was ok

13 years old man is ure ass even allowed on this site…
I’ll beat u so bad u’ll be leavin faster than N-Sight…
Didnt feel this

Batter u with my lyrics leavin u black and bruised…
I just spit a basic verse and ure still looking all confused…

wack



Overall this was basic. I mean you seemed to of tried with personals and playing off his name etc but it didnt do much. It wasnt very strong. No lines really stood out for me and I just think u cud of done alot better.

V=gotta ass.....