hey yo, that some nice shit, deep. n Nice flow, goes together nicely. couple thangs- 1, it don't look like you rhymin in bars, once ya do that, jus make sure the bars themselves rhyme too. and 2, Multi's are any MC/Texcee's friend. (multiple syllable rhyming.) and inners (check tutorials) jus add to the elevation. Nice verse, homes. I was feelin that. if you new to this, you gon be Ill in weeks/months time.

Peace