aight my explanation will be a lil shorter than the rest. asswhoopin i liked how u put it to the ether beat cause i was listenin to that before i opened up this battle. its good u had a lota personals specially bout him ridin nsights dick(but now they hate each other). i liked the multi u used down at the bottom ur flow and strucutre was good specially cause it fit that beat.

solo ur punches were weaker so were ur persoanls.i dont kno it didnt sound like a raw verse to me but the persoanls were nice i liked them. strucutre anf dlow were ok needed some work on this battle i seen ur other battles its usually more complex. this was a close battle real close.

v/gotaasswhoopin

return the favor hit up these 2 battles aight no hate thanks pc
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130036
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033