Fine Mind-You didnt have the structure, your punches was
weak and the worst part of why you lost it becuz you didnt
rhyme or have anything like similies or metaphores or nothing

YAR-You had multies which killed it but mainly your punches
was kindof weak, You had some ill punches like the last one
murked it but about the similies and metaphores was aight
but no kindof personals and a lack

OVerall-YAr won this becuz he rhymes and he had everything
better and Fine didnt have nothing which made his verse weak
Both keep elevating

v/YAR for rhyming and having everything better

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