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Go head trip it aint nutin to drop a clip again....got my dogs to catch me when im fallin....pass the weed and hennesy i hear it calling Nigga

You Aint Ready \\vs//Fine Mind [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//The Chosen One [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//A$e [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//Adamtomo[He neva showed Up]
You Aint Ready\\vs//Darrk
[Do i smell pussy...i dropped he neva did]

you an't ready.. i'm sure you damn an't ready/
need to get a hold of yaself... instead of masturbatin penis/
im hitting you like i got your whole soul in the palm of my hand/
you will never last in the game, i'll have to shoot you before you can hit fame/
this guy got no skill, all he ever does.. is take viagra pillz, propblebly explains/ your sick avatar.. i guess you look like dat in real life... retarded/
you can't even test my skill... you'll get shocked like a lightnin volt/
smoke your ass... on fire... till you need to be extinquished/
i got da lyrics of a 100 army patroling, make sure i blast you before u hit thirty/
you'll be sufficated just for talking... gettin hit in broad day light/
like whenever i see you, start swinging with both boxing arms up/
i'll punch your lights out, till you have brain trauma/
when your coughing up blood, i'll get my dog to lik it up/
i'll paint a picture of what you' be like shot dead, seing a disturbing image
the battles over, your compretition has gone horrably wrong/

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

Aight....

Haha here we go anotha nigga who cant rhyme
He’s wack he cant even match words in at least line
I couldn’t finish readin his verse before i started to spit
Cuz he cant flow spits shit his lyrics make me sick
Spend more time rappin and stay off the dick
Your nothing to me juss anotha punk ass bitch
Your a waste of thought a waste of time
i guess its true niggas from london cant rhyme
So what were u thinkin when u wanted to drop a verse
Shit talkin only gets asses kicked or even worse in a hurse
Should’ve neva went first cuz all i did was count ya lines
U fuckin wit a killa stomp ya head nigga and rip out ya spine
Hittin this cat wit so many multies he cant keep up
Musta failed math class huh u dumb fuck
But you aint gotta like me suck my dick
Cuz my whole team pack Eagles like that Laura Croft chick

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Go head trip it aint nutin to drop a clip again....got my dogs to catch me when im fallin....pass the weed and hennesy i hear it calling Nigga

You Aint Ready \\vs//Fine Mind [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//The Chosen One [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//A$e [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//Adamtomo[He neva showed Up]
You Aint Ready\\vs//Darrk
[Do i smell pussy...i dropped he neva did]

dam how long this battle been open and aint nobody even voted on it...lets get some votes so it can get closed

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Go head trip it aint nutin to drop a clip again....got my dogs to catch me when im fallin....pass the weed and hennesy i hear it calling Nigga

You Aint Ready \\vs//Fine Mind [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//The Chosen One [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//A$e [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//Adamtomo[He neva showed Up]
You Aint Ready\\vs//Darrk
[Do i smell pussy...i dropped he neva did]

Fine Mind-You didnt have the structure, your punches was
weak and the worst part of why you lost it becuz you didnt
rhyme or have anything like similies or metaphores or nothing

YAR-You had multies which killed it but mainly your punches
was kindof weak, You had some ill punches like the last one
murked it but about the similies and metaphores was aight
but no kindof personals and a lack

OVerall-YAr won this becuz he rhymes and he had everything
better and Fine didnt have nothing which made his verse weak
Both keep elevating

v/YAR for rhyming and having everything better

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Yo to be honest both of ya'll need a lot of work. Fine mind........You just need to stop. Lol. Nah but fa real yo shit wasn't rhymin or makin sense. It was like you were just talkin. YAR atleast you shit rhymed but you could use some better vocabulary and lyrics.

Vote - YAR

aight aight lets go...lets get some more votes and close this battle up

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Go head trip it aint nutin to drop a clip again....got my dogs to catch me when im fallin....pass the weed and hennesy i hear it calling Nigga

You Aint Ready \\vs//Fine Mind [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//The Chosen One [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//A$e [5-0]
You Aint Ready \\vs//Adamtomo[He neva showed Up]
You Aint Ready\\vs//Darrk
[Do i smell pussy...i dropped he neva did]

My vote goes for you aint ready.

Fine needs to get fined a $100 penalty for not ryming during a battle. I only heard that U are not ready punchline onece and Im already tired of it. get a better writing team, fire Ur managers for signing U, and leave rap to those who can put 2 and 2 together to make a word ryme.... no offence dawg.

You aint Ready... Ur flow sounded like one of them overconfident white boys wit no skillz, U know the kind Im talking about. I saw that U had more potential if U tried harder atleast. U saw Ur apponents weakness(his corney rymes) and U exploited him in public like a true catholic. that why U get my vote.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

lyrical distruction
structure was ok...alot of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil, due to the stretchness...ur rhyme scheme was wack as fuck...half of ur lines didnt even rhyme...and u cant have metas if u dont rhyme, so u had no metas...wordplay was simple as hell...none of ur punches connected...attempted personal, but it came out wack...

You_aint_ready
structure was pretty good...flow was also pretty good...at least u had some sort of rhyme scheme...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...a few personals...

Overall
You aint ready had the better structure....the better flow...way better rhyme scheme...better metas...more wordplay...more punches...and more personals...so basing off of that...you aint ready ripped this fool a new asshole...

VOTE - YOU_AINT_READY

Please return the favor on the link in my sig against TheOne, because in the other link we havent posted our verses up yet...