gotta: you did good...hotter than i thought u would come good punches and decent personals...rhymes scheme was good...i understand u went off of the ether beat but this is text so it dont look right and that fucked up your structure...some lines were weak but most of them was good...decent verse
overall : 7/10
king solo: your first couple bars werent too hott but then u opened up and spit some fire....closer was funny as hell and the bar before the closer was pretty good too.....flow was consistent.....structure was perfect...decent rhyme scheme....hardly saw any meta's between either verse...but good drop
overall : 7.5/10
vote: K.S
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plz RTF
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