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Old 06-21-04, 07:33 PM   #14
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From: Im in the buildin and im feelin myself. West Coastin....What you Reppin?
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here is the breack down...

get a fair portion cuz you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin socks
punch you and u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned clocks
Good opener....8/10
Me and you meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow
So it's no big feat for virt to figure out the irony in gettin' served by Moe
that line was ok but not much of a punch...5/10
you killed befor your first line and I don't mean he good wit rap ya see?
Endin ya schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending Machines
ok word play but not worded right but it had potential....6/10
horus raps good? your outa the well like the ring movie spoof
and when i said you suck it wasn't skill it was (THETRUTH)
that was a tight personal the first line was ok but the second was ill...8/10
Seeming mushy when I win, “horus too Ill” is a common Statement
And I’d have to step down to your level cuz nigga you mod the basement
that was ill too your verse is picking up speed now...8/10
Your disses too weak you could never hit me in hard bunches
Cuz I knew you left your multies blank but how'd you use unmarked punches
it was ok probly had a meaning to it...3/10

over all he gets a 7/10


This was a long verse and hard to read at times....and it breaks the rules....
20 lines not 26 lines but lets do some judging

he disrespected rap, now he gotta be injured/
i'll snuff Virt, like the white dude in the post that he got in his picture/
it was a personal but had no punch...5/10
and i see your style kid, you been weak/ i feel bad battling a child that's only 15/
a fuckin undeveloped whack MC, who raps are empty/
what makes him think that he can rap with me/ bitch you couldn't hold it down if you were gravity/ acually i utterly
the flow on this one was fucked...but the punch was good.....7/10
damage fakes/ when i spit heat against his "watered down" flow, his rhymes evaporate/ ya'll must of needed me to try em/
but his flows won't fool me, like girl scout cookies, i won't buy em/
not a fan of three line bars...5/10
x marks the spot, your plain as the paper that your writin on/
your flow belongs in the house, like the computer that i'm typin on/
good punch....6/10
he holds micrphones only when he's dreaming that it's a Penis/
your gayness, and if rap was revelation, i'm Jesus/
don't know were your going with this line?....3/10
watch him come with some worthless shit/ some astronomical, far out, and earthless shit/ but i give my lyrics cough syrup, shit, my words are sick/
another three line bar but wat kills it is the rhyme of shit shit and sick...4/10
and i'll cut your "flow" off like a motha fuckin tourniquet/ you verbless bitch, i'll smoke you like a dub sac/
and like Tupac, i don't really think that you can "come back"/ i'll commit to whipping you and stick to it like a thumb tac/
im not feeling these lines but there ok....6/10
ya'll got dumb raps, believe it or not i wanna get dissed/ you see, he's trying to cop out ya'll, he doesn't even have nothin to spit/
ill...5/10
but as for me, i expell lyrics until my lips gone/
they got me battling weaklings, i'm "pissed off", so now virt gets "PISSED ON"/
ill punch...8/10
i'm waiting for your philisophical rhyme, you complex word play that can some how eclipse my phenominal shine/ but really i'll make you eat your heart and swallow your pride/ you'll get pealed on sight/ i'll kill u, and if you reincarnate i'll kill you twice/
Im lost here were is your rhyme schem?...3/10
coz when i rap i stick out like my abdominal/
but go ahead and rhyme, include your whack punchlines, and edgar allen metaphores, just try and make it less comical/
this was an ok line nothing special...5/10
coz winning is highly inprobable, like seeing snow in the tropicals, bioooootch!/
that was a gay closer...4/10

the score is 6/10

Flow:virt
structure:virt
punches:horus
personals:horus
opener:virt
closer:virt

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