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Old 06-22-04, 02:22 AM   #9
Magic5
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lyrical distruction
structure was ok...alot of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil, due to the stretchness...ur rhyme scheme was wack as fuck...half of ur lines didnt even rhyme...and u cant have metas if u dont rhyme, so u had no metas...wordplay was simple as hell...none of ur punches connected...attempted personal, but it came out wack...

You_aint_ready
structure was pretty good...flow was also pretty good...at least u had some sort of rhyme scheme...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...a few personals...

Overall
You aint ready had the better structure....the better flow...way better rhyme scheme...better metas...more wordplay...more punches...and more personals...so basing off of that...you aint ready ripped this fool a new asshole...

VOTE - YOU_AINT_READY

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