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Old 06-22-04, 09:10 AM   #24
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overall rascal had the better verse.i liked the fly line and u used more complexity and harder punches in ur verse.potential ur verse was good but weaker and u need to work on harder punches and makin ur verses sound better the flow wastn bad jus cut down on word uses

v/rascal