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Old 06-22-04, 09:49 AM   #25
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This battle sucked, but...

Rascal: You came wittier even though it wasn't a very strong verse. Decent punchlines, it was pretty ehh... But enough. Come with better wordplay and personals. Keep elevatin'.

Potential: Your verse was bad as well. You had concepts, but they were unfounded. I mean, it's not like Rascal said Alicia's my girlfriend, so why mention that? Your verse was witty, but not personal enough, which is important in text battling. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Rascal
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