atlas the vagabond
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IP:
props to both lyricists on this one, it was nice one,respecting the verses in here today.
here's the verdict.
Dissonance-Always a fan of that structure you took. IT really sets us up to read the verse. Points on that alone. But also the verse didn't dissappoint either
Ya Dancin with a crazy "Bull", Chancin-Wrath while you Just-A-"Calf"
Not ta toot on my own "Horn", but you don’t want me ta "Thrust"-Ma-Raps
that was nice! i definatly felt the word play on that one. keep at it.
$ik-Decent structure, but i get a definate vibe that you think you don't have to spit much to win. or at least over your opponent on this one. Because i felt no energy behind this verse, or even that you were trying to win or you were hungry for the win. I know a lot better can come from you and I'm fairly dissappoint in the mediocrity in this verse. however what i do like is the last line how the words
Verbal Attack connect to
Cerebal Extract
i liked the flow of that. Other than that i'm not to into this verse truth be told.
i vote for Dissonance
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