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Old 06-24-04, 11:19 PM   #5
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damn lol at this battle 2fly holy shyt your verse was wack as fuk..man you really need to elevate alot...multies were wack...structure was off at times but it was better then the truth... punchlines were wack ...personals were again wack.. so that is why you lost.. and its pretty much explains it self just read your verse

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easily you won this battle.. your verse was pretty good.. but the structure was off at times..and it would have been better if your lines were always stretched....mutlies were iight..punchlines were pretty good. personals were igiht but some lines i wasnt really feeling...

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