ok, 10 - 15 lines,
no written shit,
you go first

That dark feelin in your gut aint love/
Its this punch goin through your ass without a glove/
Tough love aint it boy i hate wack mc's/
Claimen they hard till i leave them dead by cuttin through their arteries/
Fill their hearts with disease cause i just cant help it/
So sick i talked to a nigger and sars is how he felt it/
looken down at people who think they got skill/
leave their ass on the ground cause my words were led filled/
Kill rappers who have talent but just dont got heart/
only cause my first punch went done and ripped it apart/
Dont catch these lines cause you you playin with dangoures knives/
You a PUSSY but unlike a CAT you aint got 9 lives/

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Things In my life will take you by suprise/
Like seeing an aborted fetis in a jar opening its eyes...

-Underground Rapper

Check it,

That pathetic shit is not passion/
Check your watch 2fly, it's time to stop rappin/
talking about being hard, i'll knock you out like you popped some Volumes/
with that whack shit, my CD slippin out your palm's the only way you'll "drop an album"/
i'll rip you alive on this with full spits/
I mistook your mouth for a Steers ass, all that come out of it is "bullshit"/
this is your brain on drugs harder than weed/
you must be smoking cat nip, that whack shit is hard to believe/
I'll pay you to stop rappin, you should be embarrassed/
I don't need to beat you, your so weak, to do that i can train a parrot/
so next time bitch, don't get ahead of yourself/
that's Kamikaze, or it's more like you beheaded your self/

bumping up fa votes

damn lol at this battle 2fly holy shyt your verse was wack as fuk..man you really need to elevate alot...multies were wack...structure was off at times but it was better then the truth... punchlines were wack ...personals were again wack.. so that is why you lost.. and its pretty much explains it self just read your verse

the thruth
easily you won this battle.. your verse was pretty good.. but the structure was off at times..and it would have been better if your lines were always stretched....mutlies were iight..punchlines were pretty good. personals were igiht but some lines i wasnt really feeling...

vote=The truth
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Thanx For The Input

Votes?

this need to be upped

2Fly2Die
structure was good...flow was on target...no metas...no wordplay...no punches connected...no personals connected...ur shit was fuckin terrible...my iq dropped 10 points just reading it...

thetruth#1
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little because of the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok....

Overall
2fly had the better structure...as well as the better flow...the truth had more metas...more wordplay....more connecting punches....more personals...so basing off of that...he gets my vote...

VOTE - THETRUTH#1

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uppin for votes

This is another easy win for thetruth#1, he was atleast decent, 2fly2die was on some other shit, he must be like 15 or something....

"My CD slippin out of you palm's the only way you'll drop an album"

LMAO, that was the highlight of the battle, i gotta go with thetruth#1